you used what duke nukem said
but it didnt sound anything like duke, i thimk duke says that on the 'shrapnel city' episode.
you used what duke nukem said
but it didnt sound anything like duke, i thimk duke says that on the 'shrapnel city' episode.
this is interesting...
i like a good mystery, like 'hound of the baskervilles' or 'and then there were none'
keep up the good work!
it is like austrailia!
this is so messed up!
lololol, what the heck?
this is so funny! lololol
better...
but wasnt koops tied up in the last one? try to keep the story consistent with the other one, okay?
this is a...
movie version of 'paper mario: the thousand year door' well kinda
interesting...
a futuristic world where a boy escapes his 'city' and discovers a world different from his own, nice!
what the...
i don't get it
5 for... effort, i guess
interesting...
perfect graphics, good storyline, bad cliffhanger. my sugestion, write some short stories, practice the cliffhanger thing, read it to your family, and ask if the cliffhanger was good.
interesting...
grapics: good
storyline: confusing
music: acceptable
overall rating: 7/10
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